Nah, it's not douchey at all to critique, I really appreciate that to be honest. (There are douchey *ways* of criticizing, but pointing out mistakes, no not at all). I've reread this like three or four times before posting, but after a while I go blind when it comes to the actually narrative. I'll go over it again now that I'm home and hopefully could be more objective, but I totally don't mind if you mention anything. Thank you so much!
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Date: 2011-10-24 03:02 am (UTC)