Yep, Gabriel needs to know that Willow is a witch and Rowan does need to know that he's a father. As for the latter, he'll probably learn in time. Like I was telling Dinuriel, transition chapters are really tricky for me in particular. It wasn't infuriatingly hard, but I was sort of disappointed that it wasn't flowing the way I wanted to. I think I came to a good compromise by focusing on Gabriel and Rowan for this chapter. So I'm glad the interaction between Rowan and Gabe worked for you. Thank you. :)
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Date: 2010-08-21 01:29 am (UTC)