I know it's bad juju to do so, but I couldn't help comparing my writing for this particular chapter with other sim stories that have more of a dramatic/romantic focus (such as yours, among others) because it honestly was hard for me to do, mostly getting the emotion down while keeping everyone in character. It was surprisingly a huge challenge for me. I wanted to maintain simplicity as I've always done but at the same time I needed big emotion, if that makes any sense. So yeah, I'm very flattered that you liked it and I really appreciate you telling me so. :)
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Date: 2010-03-26 06:39 pm (UTC)