I was thinking that Otto could be Carla's father after reading Chapter 50, but when I went to re-read Carla's background chapter the name was different and I was thrown completely off. Poor Willow - I hope she starts understanding a bit better what is going on around her and starts making her own choices soon. Does Meadow's dream imply that the second sister took Sage, probably to interfere with her older sister's plans? Or was Sage part of the coven's plans? I guess we'll find out soon :) I really like how you write the characters and how everybody has their point of view and personality brought into the situation, rather than everybody striving for a common goal (I mean that Cecilia was acting up because she was neglected by Jasmine, rather than realizing that bigger things are going on with Willow). I think your story is awesome and can't wait to see your next writing project that you've been talking about.
Great chapter and I loved Otto Sims in it
Date: 2012-06-24 02:55 am (UTC)Poor Willow - I hope she starts understanding a bit better what is going on around her and starts making her own choices soon.
Does Meadow's dream imply that the second sister took Sage, probably to interfere with her older sister's plans? Or was Sage part of the coven's plans? I guess we'll find out soon :)
I really like how you write the characters and how everybody has their point of view and personality brought into the situation, rather than everybody striving for a common goal (I mean that Cecilia was acting up because she was neglected by Jasmine, rather than realizing that bigger things are going on with Willow).
I think your story is awesome and can't wait to see your next writing project that you've been talking about.