I wouldn't have kept the storyteller's voice so jokey and chatty, but it worked well (and his character's adorable!). I love the overlapping of the fairy tale and I can't wait to see how it works out. The story is so long that I think I see parts of it but I'd have to go back and read chapters again to see if I can figure it out.
Out of all of Simtopi, I think I might like Rowan the most. :) <3
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Date: 2012-04-18 10:10 am (UTC)Really well done.
I wouldn't have kept the storyteller's voice so jokey and chatty, but it worked well (and his character's adorable!). I love the overlapping of the fairy tale and I can't wait to see how it works out. The story is so long that I think I see parts of it but I'd have to go back and read chapters again to see if I can figure it out.
Out of all of Simtopi, I think I might like Rowan the most. :) <3