Sorry for not commenting in the last chapter, I guess I've been a bit out of the loop, with exam season, then having my laptop fixed and all. Anyway, you get a comment from me for this chapter at least. :)
First of all, poor Wesley, having to learn Sibyll died in such a sudden way, but at least that was a good catalyst for him to finally break free from Clara's oath. I'm so happy he and Willow managed to stay safe in the end, though I'm in still in two minds about that brief romantic scene. I guess they're just terribly confused, both of them, with Sibyll dead and the Adrian/Gabriel problem, and that's just so sad. :/ Clara (finally) getting caught by the other witches was excellent to see, though with Malcolm's words to Willow and all, it feels much more like a beginning than an end. But only time will tell, right? I loved the fact that I was completely (well, mostly) off about Abigail's true identity. For some reason, while reading the story for the first time, I got the impression that she and Clara were the same person (and Clara stayed young via magic like Malcolm did), not mother and daughter. But that does make a lot of sense. So Clara's biological father actually was Jasmine and Cecilia's grandfather? Or was he that man (can't remember his name...) who appeared in one of Clara's flashbacks?
This was a great chapter - but agh, more questions to be answered! Not that I'm complaining, mind you. ;) I can't wait to see what is in store for our cast now that Clara is (temporarily?) out of the picture. (I am also very curious about the story of Helene, Sibyll and the third sister, can't wait to learn more about them too.)
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Date: 2012-03-12 05:30 pm (UTC)First of all, poor Wesley, having to learn Sibyll died in such a sudden way, but at least that was a good catalyst for him to finally break free from Clara's oath. I'm so happy he and Willow managed to stay safe in the end, though I'm in still in two minds about that brief romantic scene. I guess they're just terribly confused, both of them, with Sibyll dead and the Adrian/Gabriel problem, and that's just so sad. :/
Clara (finally) getting caught by the other witches was excellent to see, though with Malcolm's words to Willow and all, it feels much more like a beginning than an end. But only time will tell, right?
I loved the fact that I was completely (well, mostly) off about Abigail's true identity. For some reason, while reading the story for the first time, I got the impression that she and Clara were the same person (and Clara stayed young via magic like Malcolm did), not mother and daughter. But that does make a lot of sense. So Clara's biological father actually was Jasmine and Cecilia's grandfather? Or was he that man (can't remember his name...) who appeared in one of Clara's flashbacks?
This was a great chapter - but agh, more questions to be answered! Not that I'm complaining, mind you. ;) I can't wait to see what is in store for our cast now that Clara is (temporarily?) out of the picture. (I am also very curious about the story of Helene, Sibyll and the third sister, can't wait to learn more about them too.)