There is no way telling where you're going with this - which is meant as a compliment. ;) and I don't think no one ever would think of any of your chapters as "too long". I am actually one of the apparently very few, that is not very keen on the idea of Willow and Wesley together. I see him more as an older brother than some Daddy-Long-Legs. I have this image of him as a very lonely person, frozen in time, and that the most powerful thing would be him getting together with someone equally lonely, bringing life into the existence of them both. Yeah - I know: I am really, really sentimental. :D But it is your story and the rest of us are just here for the ride. I just hope that Jasmine and Adrian won't end up with others, because you've managed to make them seem to belong together. They are simply so right for each other and I can't see that changing. Clara is in all her evilness also someone I almost feel sorry for. You can see from where it all came. The incapacity to learn from her experiences and get some insight – not just knowledge – is all her own though. I would have thought that it would be too early to dismiss her from this story, so your answers to the comments above did not surprise me. Someone so evil and so determined to “rule them all” – that must end in utter disaster. So - some things are clear now, and some trials are over, but I do think we are coming to the most exiting part of this story. I am sooooo much looking forward to your next update.
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Date: 2012-02-22 09:30 am (UTC)I am actually one of the apparently very few, that is not very keen on the idea of Willow and Wesley together. I see him more as an older brother than some Daddy-Long-Legs. I have this image of him as a very lonely person, frozen in time, and that the most powerful thing would be him getting together with someone equally lonely, bringing life into the existence of them both. Yeah - I know: I am really, really sentimental. :D But it is your story and the rest of us are just here for the ride. I just hope that Jasmine and Adrian won't end up with others, because you've managed to make them seem to belong together. They are simply so right for each other and I can't see that changing.
Clara is in all her evilness also someone I almost feel sorry for. You can see from where it all came. The incapacity to learn from her experiences and get some insight – not just knowledge – is all her own though. I would have thought that it would be too early to dismiss her from this story, so your answers to the comments above did not surprise me. Someone so evil and so determined to “rule them all” – that must end in utter disaster.
So - some things are clear now, and some trials are over, but I do think we are coming to the most exiting part of this story. I am sooooo much looking forward to your next update.