You know what makes a damn good read? When the words wrap you up and its like you can picture everything taking place in front of you, as if you're there as a by passer watching from the sidelines. That is what this chapter done for me ;p and Simtopi always do, I'm just more of a lurker than commenter. But I want to start giving credit where credit is due, and frankly, Your story is better than some books I've came across reading ;] Everything was beautifully done.
I feel so bad about Willow, I keep thinking Wesley will come to save her but ;[ that stupid pact he made with Clara is stopping him. Has Willow ever gotten completely over Adrian?
I know its wrong.. but I love Clara lol. Shes the bad guy yes, but in the end, she's worked so hard to get or try to get where she's become right now. Getting that book would make her even more powerful than Malcom yes?
and Helene!! I have mixed feelings about her! the plot thickens!
Jasmine and Gabriel was perfect, it really did feel like you were reading about cousins/best friends
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Date: 2011-10-25 11:15 pm (UTC)I feel so bad about Willow, I keep thinking Wesley will come to save her but ;[ that stupid pact he made with Clara is stopping him. Has Willow ever gotten completely over Adrian?
I know its wrong.. but I love Clara lol. Shes the bad guy yes, but in the end, she's worked so hard to get or try to get where she's become right now. Getting that book would make her even more powerful than Malcom yes?
and Helene!! I have mixed feelings about her! the plot thickens!
Jasmine and Gabriel was perfect, it really did feel like you were reading about cousins/best friends