I really love the dream scene. It was really spooky and creepy, but not over the top. And the foreshadowing... man, this is going to be so exciting.
And that Construct still creeps me out. Did you ever explain why it's there? (I'll need to go read back and check)
Oh and I'm such a dork. After Cecilia saw that ghost I immediately went and check the wiki to see what a white ghost means XD
You really are an amazing writer. After I finished this chapter I immediately wanted to read the next. But sim stories unfortunately don't work like books do. So I'll just wait patiently (well, not that patiently) for the next one.
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Date: 2011-07-17 12:31 am (UTC)And that Construct still creeps me out. Did you ever explain why it's there? (I'll need to go read back and check)
Oh and I'm such a dork. After Cecilia saw that ghost I immediately went and check the wiki to see what a white ghost means XD
You really are an amazing writer. After I finished this chapter I immediately wanted to read the next. But sim stories unfortunately don't work like books do. So I'll just wait patiently (well, not that patiently) for the next one.