Great chapter as always, Mela! You always do such a good job of making these normally boring expository chapters really interesting (also, squee, Cecilia!)
I really, really liked the graphic match (is it okay to use film terms in a sims story?) between the construct and Willow. You kind of do it at the beginning between Willow and Jasmine, and it's really neat to see shots planned out that well.
Gosh, I hope Adrian doesn't be a dork and leave Jasmine. I really like them together, but that's one of those relationships that you can see not working out. Jasmine is too stubborn and Adrian seems like he's too wishy-washy, but they're just sooo cuuuute together. Think of the pretty babies!
It's the same with Gabriel and Willow. Though they seem perfectly complimentary to each other, I can see their differences (not to mention Willows problems right now) completely throwing the whole relationship. Maybe it's just me, though.
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Date: 2011-07-16 08:36 pm (UTC)I really, really liked the graphic match (is it okay to use film terms in a sims story?) between the construct and Willow. You kind of do it at the beginning between Willow and Jasmine, and it's really neat to see shots planned out that well.
Gosh, I hope Adrian doesn't be a dork and leave Jasmine. I really like them together, but that's one of those relationships that you can see not working out. Jasmine is too stubborn and Adrian seems like he's too wishy-washy, but they're just sooo cuuuute together. Think of the pretty babies!
It's the same with Gabriel and Willow. Though they seem perfectly complimentary to each other, I can see their differences (not to mention Willows problems right now) completely throwing the whole relationship. Maybe it's just me, though.
Also, Malcolm Landgraab just skeeves me out.