First, Jasmine and Adrian: YES! And I'm totally buying that it would happen this way, too, given their respective personalities. Jasmine has been under a lot of stress, and there's only so much she could do to resist Adrian's persistence. When it's a good idea or not, well....that's something that is fine to leave for another chapter. For now, it's just hot!
Willow is coming across as annoying, and that's good--it's probably not a good thing for your heroine to be likeable all the time. She has to make mistakes and be a real person. She has to go through some things so she can grow and change and so it will make sense that she is actually growing and changing. It wouldn't make sense any other way. I'm really excited to see Wesley, even if he is doing something bad--it's been too long! This was a wonderful chapter, and full of so many intriguing developments!
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Date: 2011-05-27 10:00 pm (UTC)Willow is coming across as annoying, and that's good--it's probably not a good thing for your heroine to be likeable all the time. She has to make mistakes and be a real person. She has to go through some things so she can grow and change and so it will make sense that she is actually growing and changing. It wouldn't make sense any other way. I'm really excited to see Wesley, even if he is doing something bad--it's been too long! This was a wonderful chapter, and full of so many intriguing developments!