oh wow...I love this. I love how you moved from one to another, keeping the emotion quiet but intense, and how you finished with Willow attempting to make sense of what never makes sense: love and regret and fear.
I like Ben with Meadow but he's no Rowan. The shot of Rowan with his boot on Sage's trike is priceless! I love every single shot from the opening with the elevated train tracks to the final pic of the empty mirror.
This is a wonderful, beautifully written and bittersweet piece of writing. Completely perfect.
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Date: 2011-04-08 12:26 pm (UTC)I like Ben with Meadow but he's no Rowan. The shot of Rowan with his boot on Sage's trike is priceless! I love every single shot from the opening with the elevated train tracks to the final pic of the empty mirror.
This is a wonderful, beautifully written and bittersweet piece of writing. Completely perfect.