I was very excited to see this on my f-list tonight! Yay for updates and plot thickenings. Very curious as to where several things in this chapter will lead.
Besides wanting to know who's related to who (and really wanting to compare facial features properly), I'm curious as to Clive's motivation. I know that he's not as immune to Denise as he'd like her to believe but I'm wondering if the purchase of the bar is about her or Malcolm. Two birds one stone most likely.
I really liked what you did with the pictures in this one. The hiding of facial features (which you've used effectively in the past) and the mirroring of past and present .
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Date: 2011-03-18 06:11 am (UTC)Besides wanting to know who's related to who (and really wanting to compare facial features properly), I'm curious as to Clive's motivation. I know that he's not as immune to Denise as he'd like her to believe but I'm wondering if the purchase of the bar is about her or Malcolm. Two birds one stone most likely.
I really liked what you did with the pictures in this one. The hiding of facial features (which you've used effectively in the past) and the mirroring of past and present .