Hi! I'm a big time stalker (since chapter 16 of this story) and I LOVE how it's going so far. :D
I understand Willow's want of not wanting Gabriel to get hurt, but I think she's making a mistake if she breaks up with him. I really like those two together, and besides, even if she breaks up with him, he might still be targeted for knowing who she is and her secret (which is not so much of a secret anymore).
I also like how you portray the maxis characters. You still keep it to where they're like they were set up as with their personalities and stuff, but you make them your characters by giving them a more depth of a personality than what maxis gave them.
I will be honest, the last picture of Gabriel's face (the one where he says "Then don't do this.") definitely made me cry. I told myself not to cry, but I ended up bawling my eyes out because the picture was so great and definitely emitted the emotion that Gabriel was feeling (or it could be just me).
This is an awesome story, and I can't to see what'll happen.
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Date: 2011-01-23 12:35 am (UTC)I understand Willow's want of not wanting Gabriel to get hurt, but I think she's making a mistake if she breaks up with him. I really like those two together, and besides, even if she breaks up with him, he might still be targeted for knowing who she is and her secret (which is not so much of a secret anymore).
I also like how you portray the maxis characters. You still keep it to where they're like they were set up as with their personalities and stuff, but you make them your characters by giving them a more depth of a personality than what maxis gave them.
I will be honest, the last picture of Gabriel's face (the one where he says "Then don't do this.") definitely made me cry. I told myself not to cry, but I ended up bawling my eyes out because the picture was so great and definitely emitted the emotion that Gabriel was feeling (or it could be just me).
This is an awesome story, and I can't to see what'll happen.