Man was I happy to see this show up in my friends list.
First off, let me gush over your pictures. There's so many little things you do that are so damn fantastic in your pictures. The shot of Clara throwing the book and knocking down the vase... AWESOME. There's also little things that make me go, "How did she do that?", like Cecilia reaching up to Adrian's head wound. Or Tucker pulling the magazine out from under the bed. Visually, I think your story is one of the best around.
And the best part of that is that it's matched by the story. I love your characters and the way you craft the story. I know you get worried with each of these slow chapters, but honestly, I think it's just general author nerves. I always want more of your characters. I think they're three-dimensional characters that have their strengths and their flaws and I'm always eager to see what happens next.
The beginning with Clara blew me away. So totally unexpected. Poor Wesley. She really needs a beat down. And if she hurts Tucker, I am so totally going to... I don't know, but it won't be nice.
AND OMGOMGOMGOMG THEYKISSEDTHEYFINALLYKISSEDANDITWASN'TDRUNKKISSING!
There damn well better be more Jasmine and Adrian soon. :)
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Date: 2010-09-18 02:19 am (UTC)First off, let me gush over your pictures. There's so many little things you do that are so damn fantastic in your pictures. The shot of Clara throwing the book and knocking down the vase... AWESOME. There's also little things that make me go, "How did she do that?", like Cecilia reaching up to Adrian's head wound. Or Tucker pulling the magazine out from under the bed. Visually, I think your story is one of the best around.
And the best part of that is that it's matched by the story. I love your characters and the way you craft the story. I know you get worried with each of these slow chapters, but honestly, I think it's just general author nerves. I always want more of your characters. I think they're three-dimensional characters that have their strengths and their flaws and I'm always eager to see what happens next.
The beginning with Clara blew me away. So totally unexpected. Poor Wesley. She really needs a beat down. And if she hurts Tucker, I am so totally going to... I don't know, but it won't be nice.
AND OMGOMGOMGOMG THEYKISSEDTHEYFINALLYKISSEDANDITWASN'TDRUNKKISSING!
There damn well better be more Jasmine and Adrian soon. :)