Cliffhanger, your doin it rite :D I may not express it right because I'm french :p but I still want to say that your transition struggle doesn't show, the chapter is flawless imo. Nice balance between the characters, and all the major plot lines are covered. The idea of Sybill's cenotaph was brilliant, I really hoped (actually I still do) it was still used as a bed, I'll start mourning when I see the bod.. ahem, the ashes ^^ Even Rowan kept to himself most of his pathos (from lack of time, mostly, but still^^), but aren't you afraid he'll get back at you in your nightmares for revealing that he's afraid of ... kittens ahaha yeah I talk I talk but not unlike Willow with Gabe I waited six long days to read -the moment had to be right :D so now I need to express stuff! anyway, not to sound like a Willow hater (being the author of Willow's new hairdo question on the formspring thing too) but am I the only one who enjoyed her not showing in this update? I guess it's the Harry Potter effect (well die already and let the Malefoy boy or someone be heir, at least he's enthusiastic about it all) or just the fact that I hate shy simgirls (plus she's so rude with her constant reading while being talked to lol). Congrats to Mr. Wesley, not so long ago I almost wished death to his character that seemed to have become useless, and look at him, back on top as a major character after all !
Thanks for posting and bravo, this story just gets better and better!
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Date: 2010-08-26 09:46 pm (UTC)I may not express it right because I'm french :p but I still want to say that your transition struggle doesn't show, the chapter is flawless imo. Nice balance between the characters, and all the major plot lines are covered.
The idea of Sybill's cenotaph was brilliant, I really hoped (actually I still do) it was still used as a bed, I'll start mourning when I see the bod.. ahem, the ashes ^^
Even Rowan kept to himself most of his pathos (from lack of time, mostly, but still^^), but aren't you afraid he'll get back at you in your nightmares for revealing that he's afraid of ... kittens ahaha
yeah I talk I talk but not unlike Willow with Gabe I waited six long days to read -the moment had to be right :D so now I need to express stuff! anyway, not to sound like a Willow hater (being the author of Willow's new hairdo question on the formspring thing too) but am I the only one who enjoyed her not showing in this update? I guess it's the Harry Potter effect (well die already and let the Malefoy boy or someone be heir, at least he's enthusiastic about it all) or just the fact that I hate shy simgirls (plus she's so rude with her constant reading while being talked to lol).
Congrats to Mr. Wesley, not so long ago I almost wished death to his character that seemed to have become useless, and look at him, back on top as a major character after all !
Thanks for posting and bravo, this story just gets better and better!