Your transition chapters are always better than you give yourself credit for. We need the small, character driven moments to make the OMGPLOT moments all that more poignant, and no matter how frustrated these chapters make you, you do character very well. :)
You also do pictures very well. The shot of Wesley-Bat flying over Gabriel and Rowan made me go, "Ooooooh." Makes me want to be a better storyteller too. :)
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Date: 2010-08-21 05:05 am (UTC)You also do pictures very well. The shot of Wesley-Bat flying over Gabriel and Rowan made me go, "Ooooooh." Makes me want to be a better storyteller too. :)