Now I am kicking myself for not reading sooner, though I did enjoy the having a lot to read all at once.
I said this once before, it is worth repeating. Your pacing is wonderful. Most recently in this latest chapter. There is the left over tension from the last chapter added to by Rowan's apprehension, Jasmine and Adrian's narrow escape, Willow's overall unease and feelings of simply needing to be somewhere else, then all hell breaks lose ... beautiful.
I am finding myself analyzing the interactions between the characters as well. The various relationships are in a constant state of flux and the transitions are so natural, a flow of emotions. I am terrible at describing this stuff. I can recognize it, I just can't seem to put it into words. I hope you understand what I am saying. Very believable and really makes them come alive.
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Date: 2010-05-27 01:09 am (UTC)Now I am kicking myself for not reading sooner, though I did enjoy the having a lot to read all at once.
I said this once before, it is worth repeating. Your pacing is wonderful. Most recently in this latest chapter. There is the left over tension from the last chapter added to by Rowan's apprehension, Jasmine and Adrian's narrow escape, Willow's overall unease and feelings of simply needing to be somewhere else, then all hell breaks lose ... beautiful.
I am finding myself analyzing the interactions between the characters as well. The various relationships are in a constant state of flux and the transitions are so natural, a flow of emotions. I am terrible at describing this stuff. I can recognize it, I just can't seem to put it into words. I hope you understand what I am saying. Very believable and really makes them come alive.