I've been meaning to read this story for a while now, and I'm so glad I finally got around to it. I read this in maybe three or four sittings--so many instances of "Just one more chapter" or "Just until the next multiple of five". Literally could not stop reading. Died a little inside when I reached the bottom of Chapter Twenty-Seven only to find that there was no link to Chapter Twenty-Eight.
I love this whole world you've got here. You've taken the Maxis elements and put your own creative spins on them, and it's absolutely brilliant. And I love your characters. They're not the cookie-cutter archetypes that show up all the time. They're the sort of people you might meet in class, in a bar, on the street, wherever, only with that extra little spark that makes them endearing. Well done :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! There are so many things going on and I'm really excited to see how they all tie together. Keep up the great work :D
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Date: 2010-05-12 10:35 pm (UTC)I love this whole world you've got here. You've taken the Maxis elements and put your own creative spins on them, and it's absolutely brilliant. And I love your characters. They're not the cookie-cutter archetypes that show up all the time. They're the sort of people you might meet in class, in a bar, on the street, wherever, only with that extra little spark that makes them endearing. Well done :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! There are so many things going on and I'm really excited to see how they all tie together. Keep up the great work :D