I started writing a post and then it disappeared, but oh well.
I am getting caught up - you've improved a lot since the beginning.
Great cliffhanger, btw. :)
I can also see where you had trouble with the shippy stuff, but I think it works and fits in with the tone of the story. You can always just say it's characterization and that Willow was uncomfortable with it.
Hmm, so if I put a note up saying criticism was welcome would I actually get honest responses? *takes notes*
I am personally a fan of more pics and less words in Sims stories, so I like that about your story. :) Also, your pics are really well done - I never used poseboxes or OMSPs or anything but I can see that you use them with more skill than most people - posed Sims can seem so awkward. But yours are all natural and the poses are perfect for the emotions and actions that you're trying to get across.
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Date: 2010-04-24 05:27 am (UTC)I am getting caught up - you've improved a lot since the beginning.
Great cliffhanger, btw. :)
I can also see where you had trouble with the shippy stuff, but I think it works and fits in with the tone of the story. You can always just say it's characterization and that Willow was uncomfortable with it.
Hmm, so if I put a note up saying criticism was welcome would I actually get honest responses? *takes notes*
I am personally a fan of more pics and less words in Sims stories, so I like that about your story. :) Also, your pics are really well done - I never used poseboxes or OMSPs or anything but I can see that you use them with more skill than most people - posed Sims can seem so awkward. But yours are all natural and the poses are perfect for the emotions and actions that you're trying to get across.
Jasmine rocks. She's my favorite. :)