Date: 2010-04-23 05:25 am (UTC)
Because I'm always long winded, I'll keep this short.
I absolutely love your story. And this is.. Well I'll just say that, its practically awesome enough for the Nobel prize for writing?
I also have to say that I liked how you handled the scene with Gab and Willow. Sweet and simple. X rated it just a bit much for me any way.
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