I saw you posted this yesterday just as I had to run out so I'm only just getting the chance to read and comment and I loved it as usual :)
As a couple of other people have said you are better the romance drama stuff than you give yourself credit for, if you hadn't said anything I wouldn't have known you struggled with this chapter. But I like how you don't over dramatize things on that front, and in some ways less is more. The romantic suggestion between Gabriel and Willow is just as touching and sexy as if you were to go more in depth with the whole conversation. This way it sort of just flows naturally.
You know speaking of those two, for some reason I always thought of Gabe as being older than Willow, now I'm not sure why that is, as I guess she is a senior, so he couldn't actually be older than she is and still be in Uni. I also resisted the urge to shake her a few times to try to get the doubts out of her brain with Adrian, but hey, I loved how it ended with her and Gabe so, yay for sexy time making me smile or something.
Your sets are always lovely btw, but in particular I loved the one that was the student lounge thing, or whatever you want to call it, gorgeous building.
Anyway, this was a pleasure as always, and whether the next part is supernatural fun times or moar dramaz I can't wait to see it :)
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Date: 2010-03-26 09:07 am (UTC)As a couple of other people have said you are better the romance drama stuff than you give yourself credit for, if you hadn't said anything I wouldn't have known you struggled with this chapter. But I like how you don't over dramatize things on that front, and in some ways less is more. The romantic suggestion between Gabriel and Willow is just as touching and sexy as if you were to go more in depth with the whole conversation. This way it sort of just flows naturally.
You know speaking of those two, for some reason I always thought of Gabe as being older than Willow, now I'm not sure why that is, as I guess she is a senior, so he couldn't actually be older than she is and still be in Uni. I also resisted the urge to shake her a few times to try to get the doubts out of her brain with Adrian, but hey, I loved how it ended with her and Gabe so, yay for sexy time making me smile or something.
Your sets are always lovely btw, but in particular I loved the one that was the student lounge thing, or whatever you want to call it, gorgeous building.
Anyway, this was a pleasure as always, and whether the next part is supernatural fun times or moar dramaz I can't wait to see it :)