I agree with Orikes, you write romance really well, as well as drama. There was a lot in this chapter. :D I just really hope that Jasmine + Willow won't have strained friendship because of the Adrian Thing, and it really pleases me how 'real' your characters are. As in, everything isn't going perfect for them. For example, how Willow is so happy with Gabriel, that her whole world should be perfect, but it's not, because she still has feelings for Adrian. And how Adrian + Jasmine should be getting together, because they're almost perfect for each other, but they can't, because Adrian doesn't return her feelings. I really like that. (If that makes any sense xD) I liked this chapter a lot, too. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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Date: 2010-03-25 04:57 pm (UTC)I just really hope that Jasmine + Willow won't have strained friendship because of the Adrian Thing, and it really pleases me how 'real' your characters are. As in, everything isn't going perfect for them. For example, how Willow is so happy with Gabriel, that her whole world should be perfect, but it's not, because she still has feelings for Adrian. And how Adrian + Jasmine should be getting together, because they're almost perfect for each other, but they can't, because Adrian doesn't return her feelings. I really like that. (If that makes any sense xD)
I liked this chapter a lot, too. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)