Date: 2010-03-25 07:38 am (UTC)
eeeee! I was so excited to see this go up.

First off, you do a better job writing romance than you give yourself credit for. I think you do a good job capturing emotion on a general level, and romance is just another exploration of emotions. There's a degree of uncertainty in the way your characters are approaching it, which I think makes it feel very real.

Second off, dammit Adrian! You are not supposed to ruin my shipping you and Jasmine! (I keed.. I like that it's not easy for them, but I still hope it'll work out in the end.)

I loved the little scene with Cecilia and Willow too. Cousins doesn't mean they have to get along, does it. :)

Goooood stuff and well worth the wait.
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