I adore the ending!! Huge fan of shots with no text, if they can carry the plot forward, and this sequence certainly does!
Adrian's ok, although perfect guy would get old fast I'm afraid. Sort of prefer Kyle...
That whole scene was really well done, starting with Kyle showing up and ending with Adrian leaving. Quick, witty, realistic and really well written.
Cecilia and the ghost and the beginning piece with Malcolm and the charming scene with Gabriel and Sage and Willow and Meadow, all lovely and beautifully written. Honestly, you have like 4 updates here in one!
Transitional pieces probably feel more awkward to the writer than to the reader. Huge drama and action can't happen nonstop. You have to let the reader breathe! I thought it was well done and beautifully shot.
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Date: 2010-03-06 11:49 pm (UTC)Adrian's ok, although perfect guy would get old fast I'm afraid. Sort of prefer Kyle...
That whole scene was really well done, starting with Kyle showing up and ending with Adrian leaving. Quick, witty, realistic and really well written.
Cecilia and the ghost and the beginning piece with Malcolm and the charming scene with Gabriel and Sage and Willow and Meadow, all lovely and beautifully written. Honestly, you have like 4 updates here in one!
Transitional pieces probably feel more awkward to the writer than to the reader. Huge drama and action can't happen nonstop. You have to let the reader breathe! I thought it was well done and beautifully shot.