Oooh. I love seeing these updates in my friends list. I devour them up and want another one!
I loved the fight between Jasmine and Adrian. You could cut the sexual tension there with a knife. Is he as oblivious to her feelings as he seems? And for a tough girl, she's awfully vulnerable about her feelings.
The bit with the Tinkers was also interesting. It was a nice change seeing Melody as a nice kid. :)
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Date: 2009-12-29 07:20 pm (UTC)I loved the fight between Jasmine and Adrian. You could cut the sexual tension there with a knife. Is he as oblivious to her feelings as he seems? And for a tough girl, she's awfully vulnerable about her feelings.
The bit with the Tinkers was also interesting. It was a nice change seeing Melody as a nice kid. :)