I've finally started reading your story after hearing about it for so long, and I'm loving it! I love love love the comic book feel to the staging of the shots and the dialogue is super snappy and fun. I can definitely see how this scene had to have been in your head all along when you were first planning the story, and I'm sure it was excruciating to have to wait so long to develop it and take the time to reveal it, but it was definitely worth the care. Lovely!
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Date: 2010-12-08 03:59 pm (UTC)