Date: 2010-12-04 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valpre.livejournal.com
I love your use of flashbacks, it flows so smoothly I don't feel the transitions sometimes until I'm entangled with the present and the past.

High school kids can be pretty mean sometimes, and poor Willow seems to have gotten the worst of it :(

That last scene with Ms. Cordial was a little tense and unsettling, and just a bit overly protective!

I agree with Ning, that last shot made my heart sore. I can just imagine the horror those girls out her through at the party :(
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